Why does this song work in such a weird way? :D
This is so awesome.. This should get front page! =)
It just flows beautifully..
I love this!
It's like you're tripping in space or something :P beautiful melody structure, really.. Awesome!.
Good, but could be better..
The intro was very nice, and I'm not a musician so I can't say for sure what should have happened at 1:07 instead of it launching into that drum stuff, but I think it would have been a lot better if you had kept it low key with just the pads with maybe some new tiny tunes and tweaks here and there throughout, but no huge advances.
I think everything goes downhill at 1:07, the beat is very nice but it just doesn't feel right after such a calm melodic intro.
Hope you don't mind the criticism, the song is still good, but for me personally it could have been a lot better if you'd have played around with some more ambient pads and tunes :)
Keep it up ^^
9/10 - 5/5
This is such an awesome track, wish I could find an epic flash for it to go in to honour it. Maybe I will make something especially for it ^^
No not Sparta, its awesome!, this is legendary!
Well Thank you quite a bit Sir! I'm glad I could entertain.
Flows nicely, very positive. I R LIEKING :D
thank you very much =)
I like it, at first I was wondering whether the new sounds would be better or worse fitted into my game, or indeed just as a remake of your song, however after a few listens I concluded they would be probably more suitable for my game, as it is set in the future, and the newer sounds that recreate this song seem to do that justice somewhat.
However, there is a draw back, hence another 8, it would get 10 if perfect, and I still hear two flaws.
The opening sequence from 0-15 could sound a lot more atmospheric if more re-verb was added, to draw a music picture of some open wasteland or sprawling desolate place, I can hear slight re-verb, but I suspect not quite enough, although if you do add more don't add too much so it overlaps, it just needs a little.
Now the main heart of the song for me starts at 16, and there is nothing wrong with this, and the new sound at 33 fits also, however you still feel the need to add something after so long into the song, and this ruining factor starts at 48, take this sound out and it will be fine just looping what it does from 33, honestly.
However at 1:04 a new sound comes in playing every 2-3 seconds that would fit quite well with what is there already from 33, so maybe add that at 48 instead of the other sound?
There is also a mellow wind/howl effect nearing the end, this is good, at some point in the song it should dip like this and go mellow, playing the wind sound, it is good, sets a very empty and alone atmosphere.
If you didn't understand what the hell I were talking about or just can't be bothered to remake again in general for my picky preferences don't worry :P just send a PM telling me to piss off or something lolol
I appreciate you trying, and hope you try once more, you nearly have exactly what I'm looking for :)
ok i'll give it another try soon
LEGENDARY!!! - Gold Rank
Amazing, and indeed Legendary!, its rare I give a 10/10, it has to be very good.
For what this song is, its perfect, I cannot hear any flaws, glitches, or anything that shouldn't be in there, I really cannot provide constructive feedback other than its Legendary :P
I am also interested in using this song as the main theme to an upcoming Flash of mine, will be only a small minigame, but my first seriously attempted Flash game, do you grant permission for me to use this? full credit will be given :)
5/5 Gold Rank
yes. I you can use this in the project ^_^
thanks for this nice compliment :D
Just beautiful, it reminds me of a wasteland, like an after the end of the world scene back on Earth.
As Flash Designer however, I can't help wondering what a remade version using only sounds from the first 31 seconds would sound like but built upon, for this would indeed be a lot more subtle and fit one of my projects.
But really this song is fine on its own for listening to, and you will be probably too busy to make a new version for me to hear.
However in case you change your mind, you can PM me for my email :)
This song is great and relaxing also, nice job.
well this was just a test, if you want I can make a remake. Just Ask
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